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The lonesome poet sat at his table,
Tried to pen something down,
But he was largely unable,

He sat there frozen,
For he had nothing to say,
His heart was lost; lost to the ocean
Without her, this was another wasted day

He surrounded himself in company and called up a few friends,
But irony irony irony,
He still felt lonely,
And thought of her in the end,

He let the chill take over him,
As his heart slowly sank,
His mood changed, it got rather grim,
As he drank, drank and drank,

Then the whole bar erupted,
His thoughts of her disrupted,
But only to hear a melody,
Which only brought back her memory,

"Sing us a song; you're the piano man,
Sing us a song tonight,
We're all in the mood for a melody,
And you got us feeling alright"

That night he sat awake, Thinking of her all night,

And again he sat there frozen,
For he had nothing to say,
His mind made up, and his weapon chosen,
He was going to end it all today,

One last time he saw her picture,
He stepped off a stool,
And hung himself from a light fixture

Her face was the last thing he wanted to see,
But this was all too dramatic and fake,
He gasped for air and felt himself be,
He was now finally awake,

He started the day with his feelings a blend,
He still missed her dearly,
But this was not the end,

He knew things would get better,
He knew things would get breezier,
He knew he wouldn't just forget her,
He just wished he still had her,
To make it all easier
my moods been off as of late, so you may find this a bit more morbid than usual...
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Faroohz Featured By Owner May 25, 2011  Professional Writer
this is so sensual i think!!
the mind of a poet and their feelings.. a little dark and slow
some lines are too long though it kinda shake a little while reading, but its pretty good

luv it
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SOHKES Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :D
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Faroohz Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011  Professional Writer
no prob =)
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SOHKES Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I put up 2 new ones...i think u'll like them..check em out :P
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Faroohz Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011  Professional Writer
i will for sure as soon as i get my things straighten out
and i will be commenting ;p
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kiaraht Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2011
aww why are all your poems too sad (I found it :)) in the other comment the poem didn't appeared :P It is a good one I like it :)
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SOHKES Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :)...i've been a bit sad lately..so this poem was also kinda sad :P
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kiaraht Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2011
but itīs very cool :) hope to know what pice where you into that you where telling me the other day
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SOHKES Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
u will soon enough..be patient..lol i was just out of town for 3 days..so i'll try wrking on it...but i also have to pack and move...so yea :worry:
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kiaraht Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011
When are you moving? (this week?)o.oO tome goes by so fast
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SOHKES Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
sii me voy a neuva Delhi en 30 abril
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kiaraht Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011
ya no falta nada
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SOHKES Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
ahora...no se :P
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kiaraht Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2011
where is it?
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SOHKES Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
where is what? :P
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kiaraht Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2011
nothing forget it xD
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SOHKES Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i got what u meant :P
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kiaraht Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011
xDD yeah I donīt know why that happened
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SOHKES Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
my DA has been having brain farts as of late
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kiaraht Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011
what does that mean? o.o how does your moving gone?
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SOHKES Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lol a 'brain fart' is basically when something stops working properly for a bit and then gets fine after a short period of time...i have packers and movers coming 2morro
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